“With athletes becoming bigger, faster and stronger, everyday contact sports are facing a problem that is not going away
I concluded the interview with a summary statement.
With each generation athletes seem to be getting bigger, faster, and stronger. This fact presents a huge issue for contact sports
Make each genre unified with a description and some type of conclusion
Sentence structure is very important, especially in the introductions
Genre 2- Advertisement should include evidence on why audience should purchase items (factual information). Make sure you use alignment and repetition or some type of creative word sequence.
I included statistics on how many youth athletes suffer concussions every year for ethos and pathos
I made sure everything was lined up real neat so it looked professional but memorable at the same time also included catch phrases.
I should change the way I write each time my genre changes to keep audience intrigued in the project
Genre 3- Include pictures to give the audience something visual to appreciate; it will help keep their attention. Connect relevance of genre to audience
I made sure to give a memorable picture of each athlete I discussed so the audience had a nice visual as well as a write up
I wrote my genre in a way that would establish some emotional appeal towards my audience.
If it is not just a factual piece in the genre I should always try to gain some emotional appeal from the audience. Visual representation is also key
Professional Genre 2- Do not include “I” in a professional genre. Lean more towards a professional write up than an opinionated write up
I made sure that I took out any references that related directly to me as the author of the piece. I included an alternative way of approaching the issue instead of picking sides.
When writing a professional piece it is good to include the counter argument when trying to persuade the audience however I should try to sound more professional through evidence and facts rather than just opinion
Professional Genre 3- In this genre try to summarize the whole piece
I made sure that I summarized all the main points that I hit in the entire piece not just ones that I felt were necessary.
In any conclusion you should always summarize all the main points.
(what you wrote)
(how it changed after feedback)
“With athletes becoming bigger, faster and stronger, everyday contact sports are facing a problem that is not going away
With each generation athletes seem to be getting bigger, faster, and stronger. This fact presents a huge issue for contact sports
Sentence structure is very important, especially in the introductions
I made sure everything was lined up real neat so it looked professional but memorable at the same time also included catch phrases.
I wrote my genre in a way that would establish some emotional appeal towards my audience.